Aww this is cute. c: Okay well here goes, I'm not fantastic at critiques, but hey, ya know, whatever works. Okay, well first off Pinkie looks freaking adorable in here and the graphics are adorbs. I understand it's your first game, and it's far better then what I could do, so I guess this is like a consumer's point of view. XD The controls when jumping weren't working completely. I didn't really care for the fact that you had to wait until Pinkie was fully in the air to be able to move when jumping. It look me a little while to get out of that gap because I'd jump and gold the arrow key and I'd barely get off the ground and she'd just be stuck in the air. That and the fact that nothing happens when you get to the end and jump off are basically my only complaints. Otherwise, good job! c: