! Well, she seems pretty thin and petite, and the one thing that pops out at me is her shoulders. For a small form like hers, they seem a bit too wide (which usually gives that manly, tough-guy look)
Another thing I noticed is that her hips seem a little flat. It's true not all girls are super curvy, but they've usually got a bit of a curve there (Like people say, girls are more pear-shaped compared to guys)
One last small thing I noticed is that her neck seems a little thick! It's difficult, because when you look at people's necks in real life, they are a lot wider than you usually think. But with the sonic style, or most cartoon/anime styles in general, they're usually toned down a bit
I hope this helps! Looking at the other art in your gallery, you've got a lot of talent!! I'm sure you'll have this down in a snap And if there was anything I was unclear on, just ask !
I'm aware of a lot of the things that you mentioned, I drew this on meh tablet, and I'm still getting used to it, as I just got it Saturday, and it is my first tablet. ^^' Also, it's a little difficult to balance out the body shapes between Sonic Style and anime. I'm trying though, and your advice was helpful. ^^ I'm hoping to branch the sonic style into my own anthro style instead someday, but I wanna have the basics mastered. I'm not quite ready for that yet.
I think I see what the other commenter means. If you don't mind, I could try to give a few pointers?
Another thing I noticed is that her hips seem a little flat. It's true not all girls are super curvy, but they've usually got a bit of a curve there (Like people say, girls are more pear-shaped compared to guys)
One last small thing I noticed is that her neck seems a little thick!
I hope this helps!
I'm aware of a lot of the things that you mentioned, I drew this on meh tablet, and I'm still getting used to it, as I just got it Saturday, and it is my first tablet. ^^' Also, it's a little difficult to balance out the body shapes between Sonic Style and anime. I'm trying though, and your advice was helpful. ^^ I'm hoping to branch the sonic style into my own anthro style instead someday, but I wanna have the basics mastered. I'm not quite ready for that yet.
Thank you for saying that though! ^w^